Love..

Pretty good. The words have an impact on the reader, emotion is felt from each line and that's a very important thing to include when writing such prose. The idea behind the piece is one that is found widely in this genre of literature, and others for that matter, though instead of this feeling overused it seems you have delivered the message in a slightly different way and it works. I sense heartbreak, but still love in amongst the pain, in a sense that beyond the hurt and heartbreak of being apart or being forced apart even, that the object of the narratives affection still remains the safe place to the individual. Which in a matter of speaking, gives the idea that there's something in the way of the two characters rejoining, though given the ultimatum the narrator of the piece would still choose the object of the writing. That is how i perceived it, though as a writer i am sure you had your own little story or experience to write from, and most probably a whole different idea behind it all together,but it worked for me and i enjoyed picking it apart to see what i could find within the lines. I like it. The only thing i would mention as maybe a negative would be the longer lines, i feel to add an extra edge the piece would really benefit from sharper delivery, it'd add just that little bit more to impact on the reader with an even more powerful emotion. Overall it's a good piece and well written to define it from others of the same genre, delivered in a clear narrative and is close to life in the fact it seems almost confused. Keep writing you've got potential, and with a little work this piece could be developed into something rather powerful.